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이후 교정 글 재작성과 낭독훈련 등 다양한 학습활동을 진행하여, 영작, 스피킹 실력을 향상시킬 수 있습니다.

What colored shirt are you wearing right now?

Student

I wear dark blue colored shirt right now.

Teacher

I wear a dark blue colored shirt right now.

"I added the article "a" to make the sentence better."

Student

There are ice cream character.

Teacher

There are ice cream characters.

"Change the word “character” to “characters” because it is more appropriate."

Student

I like it very much.

Teacher

"No corrections made. Good job!"

Student

It is cute to me.

Teacher

It is cute for me.

"Change the word “to” to “for” because it is more appropriate."

Student

But I don't wear it very many time. Because I wear another cloth at usual time.

Teacher

However, I don't wear it many times because I wear another shirt.

"Combine the sentences in one because they have one idea. Do not start conjunctions "but" in the beginning in the sentence. ​I rephrased the sentence to make a better composition."